“Did they listen?”

I told them to listen to us.

But they wouldn’t.

They were young.

They never thought anything could happen to them.

At that age, you think you’re immortal.

So why would they listen to us?

Why?

Even though I knew all of this I still thought they would listen to us.

And so we let them go.

We let them go and both of us thought they had listened.

It would soon be apparent they hadn’t heard a word we’d said.

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