“And then I saw her”

There was nothing in my way.


I was going to get there.

I was going to reach my goal.

Nothing was going to stop me.

Nothing could stop me.

I was so close.

That’s when I saw her.

And I found out there was something which could stop me.

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6 thoughts on ““And then I saw her””

  1. Whoa. This is nice and sweet. So you mean, you fell in love, ah, love, it would make you lose your focus until you go crazy. Ha ha. Lovely poem.
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  2. I went a completely different direction…lol. To me he “had his eye on the prize” so to speak, until she came into the picture. Kind of reminds me of “A Stop at Willoughby” (Twilight Zone episode) where this story came before he married his “high needs” wife. Good story!

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